Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you so much!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK:
1. A questions on yesterday corrections
>>Here are some questions I have for you on yesterday’s corrections.
1) >>Only then, do I get up and have breakfast.
=>In that correction, I don\'t know why you use \'do\'.
>>In this correction, I don\'t know why you used \'do\' in the sentence.
ANSWER: The word ‘do’ is part of the whole sentence, and this is just another way of saying the sentence.
You can also say, ‘Only then, I get up and have breakfast’.
You can also say, ‘Then, I get up and have some breakfast’.
*Also, because of the expression, ‘Only then’ – the word ‘do’ normally follows this expression.
Is it wrong to make sentence without \'do\'? (I get up and have breakfast)
>>Is it wrong to make a sentence without the word \'do\'? (Example: I get up and have breakfast).
ANSWER: No, it is not incorrect. This sentence form is actually correct.
2) So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles.
>>So when I order from the menu, I ask the clerk to serve some dishes except pickles.
=>I want to use the word \'excepting\', not expecting.
CORRECT!
or>>The word I used was ‘excepting’, not ‘expecting’.
ANSWER: The correct word in this sentence should be ‘expecting’ or ‘except’.
I want to tell you I ask server for a serving without of pickles.
>>I want to say, ‘I will ask a server to serve some dishes without pickles’.
Then, what is the proper sentence? Please recorrect.
CORRECT!
or>>Then, what is the correct sentence form? Please redo the answer.
ANSWER:
>>I will ask a server to serve some dishes without pickles.
or>> So when I order from the menu, I ask the clerk to serve some dishes except pickles.
2. Today\'s homework:
I think that security means making something to keep and safe.
>>I think that security means to keep something safe, or to be free from danger.
When I use the pweng homepage, security help me to get my own account.
>>When I use the pweng homepage, the security system helps me access my personal account.
And help others can\'t use my account, keeping my personal information.
>>And will ward off others from using my account, keeping my personal information safe.
Also security guards us from unexpected hazards.
>>Also, the security system guards us from unexpected hazards.
I hope to everyone trust, help and consider each other, but real world isn\'t like that.
>>I hope to trust everyone, and that we should help and consider each other, but the real world isn\'t like that.
So It is what security exists and what I think about it
>>So, this is why a security system exists, and it’s what I also think about it.
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