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2018-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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1. A questions on yesterday corrections 1) >>Only then, do I get up and have breakfast. =>In that correction, I don't know why you use 'do'. Is it wrong to make sentence without 'do'? (I get up and have breakfast) 2) So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles. >>So when I order from the menu, I usually ask the server for a serving of pickles on a dish. =>I want to use the word 'excepting', not expecting. I want to tell you I ask server for a serving without of pickles. Then, what is the proper sentence? Please re-correct. 2. Today's homework I think that security means making something to keep and safe. When I use the pweng homepage, security help me to get my own account. And help others can't use my account, keeping my personal information. Also security guards us from unexpected hazards. I hope to everyone trust, help and consider each other, but real world isn't like that. So It is what security exists and what I think about it

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you so much!

Please keep up the good work!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK:

1. A questions on yesterday corrections

>>Here are some questions I have for you on yesterday’s corrections.

 1) >>Only then, do I get up and have breakfast.

 =>In that correction, I don\'t know why you use \'do\'.

>>In this correction, I don\'t know why you used \'do\' in the sentence.

ANSWER: The word ‘do’ is part of the whole sentence, and this is just another way of saying the sentence.

You can also say, ‘Only then, I get up and have breakfast’.

You can also say, ‘Then, I get up and have some breakfast’.

*Also, because of the expression, ‘Only then’ – the word ‘do’ normally follows this expression.

 Is it wrong to make sentence without \'do\'? (I get up and have breakfast)

>>Is it wrong to make a sentence without the word \'do\'? (Example: I get up and have breakfast).

ANSWER: No, it is not incorrect. This sentence form is actually correct.

 2) So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles.

>>So when I order from the menu, I ask the clerk to serve some dishes except pickles.

=>I want to use the word \'excepting\', not expecting.

CORRECT!

or>>The word I used was ‘excepting’, not ‘expecting’.

ANSWER: The correct word in this sentence should be ‘expecting’ or ‘except’.

 I want to tell you I ask server for a serving without of pickles.

>>I want to say, ‘I will ask a server to serve some dishes without pickles’.

 Then, what is the proper sentence? Please recorrect.

CORRECT!

or>>Then, what is the correct sentence form? Please redo the answer.

ANSWER:

>>I will ask a server to serve some dishes without pickles.

or>> So when I order from the menu, I ask the clerk to serve some dishes except pickles.

2. Today\'s homework:

I think that security means making something to keep and safe.

>>I think that security means to keep something safe, or to be free from danger.

When I use the pweng homepage, security help me to get my own account.

>>When I use the pweng homepage, the security system helps me access my personal account.

And help others can\'t use my account, keeping my personal information.

>>And will ward off others from using my account, keeping my personal information safe.

Also security guards us from unexpected hazards.

>>Also, the security system guards us from unexpected hazards.

 I hope to everyone trust, help and consider each other, but real world isn\'t like that.

>>I hope to trust everyone, and that we should help and consider each other, but the real world isn\'t like that.

 So It is what security exists and what I think about it 

>>So, this is why a security system exists, and it’s what I also think about it. 

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