Homework

Hello there, [이름]! I can feel your love for your family from here. I believe that you are doing a great job as a father right now. What you wrote for today\'s homework is really good, great job! See you later! ~Teacher Elisha

I think my family make me happy.

>> I think my family makes me happy.

Specially, I really happy when they are smile and doing new things when they are growing up.

>> I am happy especially when they are smiling and when they are doing new things while growing up.
 Thesedays, my second son start to learn easy word like water and meal,etc.

>> These days, my second son is starting to learn how to say new words such as water, food and many more.

Pronunciation is not clear, but mother and father can get it what he is tring to say.

>> His pronunciation is unclear, but my wife and I can understand what he is trying to say.

It\'s so funny.

>> CORRECT!

 However, when they are sick and hurt, I became gloomy and tired.

>> However, when they are sick and hurt, I become gloomy and tired.

I think my life is changed a lot after my wife gave birth.

>> I think my life changed a lot after my wife gave birth.

It\'s very difficult be a good farther and parents, but it\'s very very amazing experiece for my life.

>> It\'s very difficult to be a good father, but it\'s an extremely amazing experience in my life.