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2018-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Dear [Name]~ Thanks for teaching me. Here is my homework. ** What is your favorite food and why? ** My favorite food is 'Bulgogi' Because Bulgogi is probably the most popular Korean food. Bulgogi is a good combination of meat and various vegetables and spices. Bulgogi with some lettuce and garlic also makes it more delicious and healthy. I'm going to take a class at 2:30 p.m. from tomorrow with you~ Please help me a lot. Bye~~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hannah!


I\'m glad that you found a suitable time that you want. ^^

I\'m also happy that you\'re still my student.

I will help you the best way I can. ^^

Thank you and have a great day!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Dear [Name]~

>> Dear [Name],
 Thanks for teaching me.

>> correct
 Here is my homework.

>> correct
 ** What is your favorite food and why? **

>> correct
 My favorite food is \'Bulgogi\'.

>> correct
 Because Bulgogi is probably the most popular Korean food.

>> correct
Bulgogi is a good combination of meat and various vegetables and spices.

>> correct

>> Or: Bulgogi is a good combination of meat, various vegetables, and spices.
Bulgogi with some lettuce and garlic also makes it more delicious and healthy.
>>
Bulgogi with some lettuce and garlic also make it more delicious and healthier.
I\'m going to take a class at 2:30 p.m. from tomorrow with you~

>> I\'m going to take a class at 2:30 p.m. from tomorrow with you. (grammatically correct. Put a period at the end of the sentence.)
 Please help me a lot.

>> correct
 Bye~~^^

>> correct

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