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Essay Writing: Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities? There are lots of hobbies which can release our stress. Shopping is one of good ways to do it. In fact, many young people who live in this society enjoy going to a department store or a large shopping mall. This essay will discribe what the good effects are expected when people enjoy shopping. First of all, this can make a positive effect to our economy. Growth of shopping rate can be one of the reasons of activating of the domestic market. There is also a theory which is about how importance of scale in the economy. And I agree with it. Second, shopping can help to release the stress. In my girlfriend's case, she likes to go shopping even she doesn't have somthing to buy. She just enjoys watching some beautiful goods and putting them on her. I think these activities give her a pleasure.

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There are lots of hobbies which can release our stress. 

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Shopping is one of good ways to do it.

>>correct

In fact, many young people who live in this society enjoy going to a department store or a large shopping mall. 

>>correct

This essay will discribe what the good effects are expected when people enjoy shopping.
>>This essay will describe what the good effects are expected when people enjoy shopping.

First of all, this can make a positive effect to our economy. 

>>First of all, this will have a positive effect in our economy.

There is also a theory which is about how importance of scale in the economy. 

>>There is also a theory which explains the importance of shopping in the economy.

And I agree with it.

>>correct

Second, shopping can help to release the stress. 

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In my girlfriend\'s case, she likes to go shopping even if she doesn\'t have something to buy. 

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She just enjoys watching some beautiful goods and putting them on her. 

>>She just enjoys window shopping.

I think these activities give her a pleasure.

>>I think these activities give her pleasure.