Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
At weekends, I usually get up at 11 a.m.
And I dawdle or play with my friends untill I start to think I have to study.
Than I slove the math problems or listen to the English internet lectures.
Than I write some stories for Writing Story Club.
Than I study more, And went to bad.
강사 첨삭
At weekends, I usually get up at 11 a.m.
>> I usually get up at 11am during the weekends.
And I dawdle or play with my friends untill I start to think I have to study.
>> CORRECT (kkkkkk)
Than I slove the math problems or listen to the English internet lectures.
>> Then, I solve math problems or listen to some English internet lectures.
Than I write some stories for Writing Story Club.
>> Then, I write some stories for writing story club.
Than I study more, And went to bad.
>> Then, I study more and go to bed.
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