Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you again for your ideas today!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
I\'m so sorry I\'m rate.
>>I\'m so sorry I\'m late.
because I had met a friend, I read the feedback now.
>>Because I had to meet a friend. I only read the feedback just now.
HOMEWORK: Do you enjoy the food on airplanes? Please explain.
In fact, I don\'t eat any foods on airplanes.
CORRECT!
or>>In fact, I don\'t eat any of the foods on the airplanes.
Because It is a special situation to get on a plane, I made an effort not having a things that can affect bad to my body.
>>Because it is a different situation when on a plane, I make an effort not to have anything that can affect my body in a bad way.
So I think It is too dangerous to sick on planes, I usually reject attendant\'s serving.
>>So, I think it is too dangerous to be sick on planes, that’s the reason I usually reject the attendant\'s service.
But when I going to Australia, I have to stay in the plane for a long time.
>>But when I go to Australia, I will be on the plane for a long time.
So, I will start craving.
>>So, I might start craving for some food.
Therefore, I will try to eat any foods on the planes.
>>Therefore, I will try to eat any of the foods on the plane.
If I didn\'t get a bad feel the foods at future, I will enjoy the food on a airplanes.
>>If I don\'t get any bad feelings about airplane foods in the future, I will enjoy it when I’m on airplanes.
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