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2018-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Most of colonisable citizen had effected by culture of controlling country, such as food style, building style even the way of communication. Many organizations are controlled under the government management. I chose that blue one, because cheaper than red product. We have to consider various aspects when select something, the one of them is that product’s cost cheaper than other things. The scenery of east sea was very fantastic, I never forgot this time. When I went to jurney, I usually collected some souvenir that express their country’s identity. I think back to my job experience, it was very long and hard time to me.

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Most of colonisable citizen had effected by culture of controlling country, such as food style, building style even the way of communication. 

>> Most people who were colonized were influenced by the colonizing nation in terms of culture, food, architecture, and language.

Many organizations are controlled under the government management.
>> Many organizations are under the control of the government.


 I chose that blue one, because cheaper than red product.

>> I choose the blue product because it\'s cheaper than the red one.

 We have to consider various aspects when select something, the one of them is that product’s cost cheaper than other things.

>> We have to consider various aspects when selecting something. One factor is the price of the product.

 The scenery of east sea was very fantastic, I never forgot this time.

>> I\'ll never forget the scenery at the east sea as it was very fantastic.

 When I went to jurney, I usually collected some souvenir that express their country’s identity.

>> Whenever I travel, I usually collect some souvenirs that express the country\'s identity.

 I think back to my job experience, it was very long and hard time to me.

>> Thinking back to my work experience, it was a very long and hard journey for me.


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