homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Hannah!
New York is a good place to visit.
I think it\'s one of the busiest cities.
You have a nice plan with your daughter. ^^
Have a great Friday!
_Teacher Dianne
Dear [Name].
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Here is my homework for today.
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** If you could travel to another country, where would it be and why? **
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I have many countries I want to visit, but I want to go to New York with my daughter.
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It is the largest city in America and the place where my friend worked before marriage.
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I want to speak English freely with my friends there.
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I also want to make precious memories with my daughter there.
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That\'s why I want to go to New York.
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