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2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Dear [Name]. Here is my homework for today. ** If you could travel to another country, where would it be and why? ** I have many countries I want to visit, but I want to go to New York with my daughter. It is the largest city in America and the place where my friend worked before marriage. I want to speak English freely with my friends there. I also want to make precious memories with my daughter there. That's why I want to go to New York.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hannah!


New York is a good place to visit.

I think it\'s one of the busiest cities.

You have a nice plan with your daughter. ^^

Have a great Friday!


_Teacher Dianne


Dear [Name].

>> correct
 Here is my homework for today.

>> correct
 ** If you could travel to another country, where would it be and why? **

>> correct
 I have many countries I want to visit, but I want to go to New York with my daughter.

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 It is the largest city in America and the place where my friend worked before marriage.

>> correct
 I want to speak English freely with my friends there.

>> correct
 I also want to make precious memories with my daughter there.

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 That\'s why I want to go to New York.

>> correct

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