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2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Thank you so much for our conversation! Today I was little shy, but you skipped that situation naturally. Then I could concentrate the class.:) Homework : What kind of transportation do you prefer usually? Please explain. I usually get on bus and train. Between a bus and a train, I often prefer a bus. In a most circumstances, I can reach a destinations by using one of them(also by using them together). But it more transfer to getting on trains than buses. Furthermore trains often full of seat, so I have a lot of experiences of having ride it as I stand up. By comparison, although buses often take long time than trains, it is more convenient.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you!

Please keep on practicing!

Have a great day and talk to you next week!

Teacher ELLY.

Thank you so much for our conversation!

CORRECT!

or>>I appreciate our conversation a lot!

Today I was little shy, but you skipped that situation naturally.

>>Today, I was a little shy, but you skipped that situation naturally.

Then I could concentrate the class.:)

>>So then, I could concentrate on the class.:)

HOMEWORK: What kind of transportation do you prefer usually? Please explain.

I usually get on bus and train.

Between a bus and a train, I often prefer a bus.

CORRECT!

or>> I usually prefer riding a bus, if I have to choose between a bus and a train.

In a most circumstances, I can reach a destinations by using one of them

>>In most of the circumstances, I can reach the destinations by using one of them.

(also by using them together).

>>(Also, by using either of them).

But it more transfer to getting on trains than buses.

>>But it is more convenient to transfer on trains than on buses.

Furthermore trains often full of seat, so I have a lot of experiences of having ride it as I stand up.

>>Furthermore, the seats on trains are often full, so I have a lot of experience standing up rather than sitting down.

By comparison, although buses often take long time than trains, it is more convenient. 

>>By comparison, although buses often take a longer time than trains, it is more convenient. 

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