Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you!
Please keep on practicing!
Have a great day and talk to you next week!
Teacher ELLY.
Thank you so much for our conversation!
CORRECT!
or>>I appreciate our conversation a lot!
Today I was little shy, but you skipped that situation naturally.
>>Today, I was a little shy, but you skipped that situation naturally.
Then I could concentrate the class.:)
>>So then, I could concentrate on the class.:)
HOMEWORK: What kind of transportation do you prefer usually? Please explain.
I usually get on bus and train.
Between a bus and a train, I often prefer a bus.
CORRECT!
or>> I usually prefer riding a bus, if I have to choose between a bus and a train.
In a most circumstances, I can reach a destinations by using one of them
>>In most of the circumstances, I can reach the destinations by using one of them.
(also by using them together).
>>(Also, by using either of them).
But it more transfer to getting on trains than buses.
>>But it is more convenient to transfer on trains than on buses.
Furthermore trains often full of seat, so I have a lot of experiences of having ride it as I stand up.
>>Furthermore, the seats on trains are often full, so I have a lot of experience standing up rather than sitting down.
By comparison, although buses often take long time than trains, it is more convenient.
>>By comparison, although buses often take a longer time than trains, it is more convenient.
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