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I would say goodbye to my family and friends if I know it will be the last hour of my life.
>> I would say goodbye to my family and friends if I know it were the last hour of my life.
I want to meet and say farewell to most of them before I leave. And I want to leave this world looking at the stars.
>> I want to meet and say farewell to most of them before leaving and I want to leave this world looking at the stars.
If I know when I will die, I can also choose where I would like to s[이름]p forevere.
>> If I know when I am dying, I can also choose my final resting place.
So I want to die confortably looking on the night sky.
>> So I want to pass away comfortably looking at the night sky.
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