Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for your notes and comments!
Have a great day and talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher ELLY.
I appreciate our conversations a lot!
CORRECT!
or>> I am very grateful with our conversations!
Here are some questions I have for you on yesterday\'s corrections.
CORRECT!
or>>Below are some of the questions I have for you regarding the corrections I got yesterday.
(Also, by using either of them).
>>(It is also on using the phrase ‘either of them’).
In this correction. I want to tell you that I also can reach the destinations by using both, not either of them.
>>In this correction. I want to tell you that I also can reach the destinations by using either of them.
ANSWER: The correct expression to be used in this case is ‘either of them’. Technically speaking, you cannot use ‘both’ of them at once. You can only use either one of them at one time. That’s why it is more appropriate to say, ‘I can reach the destination by using either one of them.’ – It means you can use one of them one at a time. It is impossible to use ‘both’ of them at once. Both of them can be used to reach the destination, but not at the same time.
(Example : bus -> train -> destination)
>>(Example : I can take the bus or the train to reach my destination)
then what can I write the sentence?
>>Then, how can I write the sentence?
ANSWER: I can either use the bus or the train to reach my destination.
or>>I have to use both the bus and the train to get to my destination. (Different meaning: You will have to take the bus and the train to be able to reach the destination.)
>>But it is more convenient to transfer on trains than on buses.
In this correction, I want to tell you that the number of transfer with only using trains is many than the number of transfer with only using buses.
>>In this correction, I want to tell you that I have to transfer on the train a number of times more when compared with the bus.
(Example : bus -> bus >> 1 transfer train -> train -> train >> 2 transfers)
>>(Example : I only transfer twice on a bus but I have to transfer 3 times on a train.)
ANSWER: It is more convenient to use the bus than the train since I only have to transfer twice.
HOMEWORK: What gift is good to bring to your host family? Please explain.
Korea have a endemic tradition, and I think Australian has a fantasy about oriental tradition.
>>Korea has a unique tradition, and I think Australians have a fantasy about oriental traditions.
So I will take some mini dolls wearing a Hanbok: Korean traditional clothes.
>>So, I will take with me some mini dolls wearing Hanboks – these are Korean traditional clothes.
Additionally, it\'s also good to take fan painted Korean painting because it\'s useful in daily life\'s on hot weather.
>>Additionally, it\'s also good for me to take a fan, painted with Korean designs, because it\'s useful in one’s daily life on a hot weather.
I hope they\'ll be happy after take these!
>>I hope they\'ll be happy because I will be taking these!
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