homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].~
I've been studying for a few days, but I'm still nervous.
However, because of your encouragement and consideration, 20 minutes of class is always fun.
Have a nice weekend. ^^
Today's homework.
* Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.*
There is famous rose park in Changwon where I live.
The Rose Festival will be held in May and June.
Millions of different kinds of roses invite people.
And there are rose tunnels, heart tunnels, and trees to grant wishes, making people happier.
During the Rose Festival, many families and lovers enjoy taking pictures.
I went there with my husband and daughter on a weekend morning in May.
We looked at the roses, taking pictures of each other.
I am using the picture of my daughter who was taken at that time as my Kakao Talk profile photo.
강사 첨삭
Hi, my dear Hannah!
Thank you so much for sharing about Rose park in your place.
I like looking at roses, especially the white ones. ^^
I think the memories from that festival mean a lot to you.
I hope you enjoyed the weekend. See you!
_Teacher Dianne
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I\'ve been studying for a few days, but I\'m still nervous.
I\'ve been studying for a few days, but I\'m still nervous.
>> correct
However, because of your encouragement and consideration, 20 minutes of class is always fun.
However, because of your encouragement and consideration, 20 minutes of class is always fun.
>> correct
Have a nice weekend. ^^
Have a nice weekend. ^^
>> correct
Today\'s homework.
* Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.*
Today\'s homework.
* Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.*
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There is famous rose park in Changwon where I live.
There is famous rose park in Changwon where I live.
>> There is a famous Rose Park in Changwon where I live.
The Rose Festival will be held in May and June.
The Rose Festival will be held in May and June.
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Millions of different kinds of roses invite people.
Millions of different kinds of roses invite people.
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And there are rose tunnels, heart tunnels, and trees to grant wishes, making people happier.
And there are rose tunnels, heart tunnels, and trees to grant wishes, making people happier.
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>> or: There are also rose tunnels, heart tunnels, and trees to grant wishes that make people happier.
During the Rose Festival, many families and lovers enjoy taking pictures.
During the Rose Festival, many families and lovers enjoy taking pictures.
>> correct
I went there with my husband and daughter on a weekend morning in May.
I went there with my husband and daughter on a weekend morning in May.
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We looked at the roses, taking pictures of each other.
We looked at the roses, taking pictures of each other.
>> We looked at the roses while taking pictures of each other.
I am using the picture of my daughter who was taken at that time as my Kakao Talk profile photo.
I am using the picture of my daughter who was taken at that time as my Kakao Talk profile photo.
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>> Or: I am using the picture of my daughter as my profile photo in Kakao Talk that was taken at that time.
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