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2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don't think the image of the singer is more important than the music. The good musics should not be buried by the image of the singer. I know one music that the singer is the offender. But I love that music. There is no reason to not listen to that music even the singer is the offender.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Your opinion is on point.

You have given a good example.

Keep writing!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t think the image of the singer is more important than the music.
>> I don\'t think the image of a singer is more important than music.
The good musics should not be buried by the image of the singer.
>> Good music should not be overshadowed by the image of the singer.
I know one music that the singer is the offender.
>> I know some music where the singer was an offender.
But I love that music.
>> Correct
There is no reason to not listen to that music even the singer is the offender.

>> There is no reason not to listen to that music even if the singer is an offender.

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