Homework.

2018-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. donate 2. console 3. this kind of situation 4. soft tone 5. never I donate some money in the church. When kids are at a bad situaion or someone is I console them at least within my heart. When I am hungry and nobody is around me it's the same sitution as this kind of situation when everybody suffer. I like the soft tone of music. I have never been to America.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

I donate some money in the church.
>> correct

When kids are at a bad situaion or someone is I console them at least within my heart.
>> I console someone who is in a bad situation.

When I am hungry and nobody is around me it\'s the same sitution as this kind of situation when everybody suffer.
>> When I am hungry and nobody is around, it\'s the same kind of situation when everybody suffers.

I like the soft tone of music.
>> correct

I have never been to America.
>> correct (If you\'re referring to the American continent.)
>> I have never been to the USA.
>> [Be careful when you use the word \'America\' as there are North America and South America. In your sentence, it\'s best to use USA.]

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