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2018-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think a typical family in our country is the fathers go for their work, mothers do the household affairs, and children studies. Well, nowadays, there are lots of familys that the fathers do the household affairs and mothers go for their work. This transition is accepted gladily. People think it is good way to get rid of sexism. And...Well, I think that's all I can write here.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You have explained the transition of Korean families well.

Times are really changing.

Keep practicing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think a typical family in our country is the fathers go for their work, mothers do the household affairs, and children studies.
>> I think a typical family in our country is where the fathers work, mothers take care of the household affairs, and children study.
Well, nowadays, there are lots of familys that the fathers do the household affairs and mothers go for their work.
>> Well, nowadays, there are lots of families with fathers who do the household chores and mothers go to work.
This transition is accepted gladily.
>> This transition is readily accepted.
People think it is good way to get rid of sexism.

>> Correct

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