HOMEWORK! ^^

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.

You have officially started your journey in becoming the world\'s next best writer. Good job! ^_^

I loved reading your essay. You\'ve written a lot of good sentences.

However, I think your experience was really traumatic.

I also hate insects especially cockroaches.

I don\'t scream when I see them but I have this very strong urge to kill them all! kkk.

Please keep writing. I am looking forward to your next essays.

See you again tomorrow in class. :)

~Teacher Charry

I\'m more afraid than I look.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I\'m actually more afraid than I let people believe.
I especially hate bugs.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I especially detest bugs.
I felt something in my ear while I was sleeping.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> While I was sleeping, I felt something in my ear.
I hit it without any thought.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I swatted it without thinking about it.
The next day I woke up and saw a giant cockroach.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The following morning I woke up and saw a giant cockroach.
I couldn\'t sleep well after that because I was so nervous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I had a difficult time sleeping well after that because I felt so nervous.
There are many mosquitoes and flies these days.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are lots of mosquitoes and flies these days.
I like summer, but I am worried about bugs.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am fond of summer but I am worried about insects.
Whenever I see a bug, I screamed suddenly and get scolded by my mom.

>> Whenever I see a bug, I suddenly scream and get scolded by my mom.
I\'m an adult, but I\'m afraid of bugs.

>> I\'m an adult but I\'m afraid of bugs.
I guess I can\'t help it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I guess it is innate.