Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for your notes and comments!
Please continue your enthusiastic behaviour in learning the English language!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
Thank you for your kind explanation about \'either of them\' and \'both\'.
>>Thank you for your kind explanation about the expressions, \'either of them\' and \'both\'.
I could understand well!:)
>>I can easily understand everything well!:)
HOMEWORK: Do you feel comfortable when you stay at a hotel? Please discuss
When I stay at a hotel, I usually feel comfortable.
CORRECT!
or>>Whenever I book a room at a hotel, I normally feel at ease.
First of all, it\'s soft bed, pillow and duvet at the room.
>>First of all, there\'s a soft bed, a pillow and a duvet in the room.
In a cool air condition, when I\'m in bed, I can feel very comfortable.
>>Because of the cool air, when I\'m in bed, I feel very comfortable.
Second, the hotel maids do a good cleaning my room when I went sightseeing.
>>Second, the hotel maids do a good job in cleaning my room when I go sightseeing.
It lessen my burden about cleaning and make me to enjoy trip.
>>It lessens my burden about cleaning up and helps me enjoy the trip.
Finaly, its\' employees always greet me with a big smile.
>>Finally, the employees always greet me with a big smile.
Their smile make my smile, even I feel bad.
>>Their smiles make me smile as well, even when I’m feeling bad.
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