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2018-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Thank you for your kind explanation about 'either of them' and 'both' I could understand well!:) HOMEWORK: Do you feel comfortable when you stay at a hotel? Please discuss When I stay at a hotel, I usually feel comfortable. First of all, it's soft bed, pillow and duvet at the room. In a cool air condition, when I'm in bed, I can feel very comfortable. Second, the hotel maids do a good cleaning my room when I went sightseeing. It lessen my burden about cleaning and make me to enjoy trip. Finaly, its' employees always greet me with a big smile. Their smile make my smile, even I feel bad.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for your notes and comments!

Please continue your enthusiastic behaviour in learning the English language!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Thank you for your kind explanation about \'either of them\' and \'both\'.

>>Thank you for your kind explanation about the expressions, \'either of them\' and \'both\'.

 I could understand well!:)

>>I can easily understand everything well!:)

 HOMEWORK: Do you feel comfortable when you stay at a hotel? Please discuss

 When I stay at a hotel, I usually feel comfortable.

CORRECT!

or>>Whenever I book a room at a hotel, I normally feel at ease.

 First of all, it\'s soft bed, pillow and duvet at the room.

>>First of all, there\'s a soft bed, a pillow and a duvet in the room.

 In a cool air condition, when I\'m in bed, I can feel very comfortable.

>>Because of the cool air, when I\'m in bed, I feel very comfortable.

 Second, the hotel maids do a good cleaning my room when I went sightseeing.

>>Second, the hotel maids do a good job in cleaning my room when I go sightseeing.

 It lessen my burden about cleaning and make me to enjoy trip.

>>It lessens my burden about cleaning up and helps me enjoy the trip.

 Finaly, its\' employees always greet me with a big smile.

>>Finally, the employees always greet me with a big smile.

 Their smile make my smile, even I feel bad.

>>Their smiles make me smile as well, even when I’m feeling bad.

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