Homework

This is true, Sir [이름]!

You handed in a great composition, keep them coming. Have a great day ahead. See you!

~Teacher Eunice

I can\'t decide which one is better.

>>> Correct!

Because life environment of all people is so different.

>>> Because people have different situations in life.

If you have a family including kids, You have to work for supporting your family.

>>> If you have a family including kids, you have to work for supporting your family.

It is your responsibility.

>>> Correct!

And It will keep a happy family.

>>> It will keep a happy family.

However, If you can supported by family(e.g. parents),I think going to the school is better than supporting family.

>>> However, if you will support your family(e.g. parents), I think going to school is better than supporting the family.

Learning is so important your life & future.

>>> Learning is so important to your life & to your future.

If you don\'t learn in school timely, You are could be unhappy in the future.

>>> If you don\'t learn in school timely, you could be unhappy in the future.

You can make a relationship with friends iㅜ school. And, Your teacher can help you plan your future as well as study.

>>> You can make a relationship with friends in school, and your teacher can help you plan your future as well as your studies.

School life can be a great foundation for your life.

>>> Correct!