Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! Reading your homework made me hungry. Kimchi jiggae is indeed one of the best dishes in Korea. Take care and see you later! =) ~Teacher Elisha
One of my favorite food is Kimchi&Pork soup.
>> One of my favorite foods is kimchi and pork soup.
I really love that food.
>> CORRECT!
Actually, It\'s easy to Cook.
>> CORRECT!
or:
>> Actually, it\'s easy to cook.
>>> It\'s actually easy to cook.
First, we have to cut the kimchi and pork as a small size.
>> First, we have to cut the kimchi and the pork into smaller sizes.
Second, put the kimchi and a little seami oil in the bowl and stir-fry together two or three minutes.
>> Secondly, we have to put the kimchi in a pot, add a little sesame oil and then stir fry them together for two to three minutes.
Third pour the water, kimchi liquid and pork together.
>> Lastly, pour water and kimchi sauce inside the pot and then add the pork.
When it is bolied, taste it.
>> Once it\'s boiling, taste it.
If taste is not good put a little kimchi liquid and boild again.
>> If it does not taste good, put more kimchi sauce and then boil it again.
That will be finished very easily as I explained.
>> As I explained, it will be easily finished.
Actually, The most important thing for Kimchi soup is Kimchi itself taste.
>> Actually, the most important ingredient in making a kimchi soup is the taste itself.
If you have good kimchi, you are never failed.
>> If you have good kimchi, you will never fail.
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