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2018-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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One of my favorite food is Kimchi&Pork soup. I really love that food. Actually, It's easy to Cook. First, we have to cut the kimchi and pork as a small size. Second, put the kimchi and a little seami oil in the bowl and stir-fry together two or three minutes. Third pour the water, kimchi liquid and pork together. When it is bolied, taste it. If taste is not good put a little kimchi liquid and boild again. That will be finished very easily as I explained. Actually, The most important thing for Kimchi soup is Kimchi itself taste. If you have good kimchi, you are never failed.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! Reading your homework made me hungry. Kimchi jiggae is indeed one of the best dishes in Korea. Take care and see you later! =) ~Teacher Elisha

One of my favorite food is Kimchi&Pork soup.

>> One of my favorite foods is kimchi and pork soup.
 I really love that food.

>> CORRECT!

 Actually, It\'s easy to Cook.

>> CORRECT!

or:

>> Actually, it\'s easy to cook.

>>> It\'s actually easy to cook.
 First, we have to cut the kimchi and pork as a small size.

>> First, we have to cut the kimchi and the pork into smaller sizes.
 Second, put the kimchi and a little seami oil in the bowl and stir-fry together two or three minutes.

>> Secondly, we have to put the kimchi in a pot, add a little sesame oil and then stir fry them together for two to three minutes.

Third pour the water, kimchi liquid and pork together.

>> Lastly, pour water and kimchi sauce inside the pot and then add the pork.

When it is bolied, taste it.

>> Once it\'s boiling, taste it.

If taste is not good put a little kimchi liquid and boild again.

>> If it does not taste good, put more kimchi sauce and then boil it again.

That will be finished very easily as I explained.

>> As I explained, it will be easily finished.

Actually, The most important thing for Kimchi soup is Kimchi itself taste.

>> Actually, the most important ingredient in making a kimchi soup is the taste itself.

 If you have good kimchi, you are never failed.

>> If you have good kimchi, you will never fail.

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