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2018-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Good afternoon.^^ It is severe scorching outside. The temperature is 35 dgree. I actully didn't feel good because of the weather. The weather is insane. It makes me annoyed. But,I'll c[이름]r up. Anyway I committed a lot of grammer laps in our class. I will try harder. Thank you for your comments. I really appreciated it. Have a great day. Connect the sentences with a suitable word-when,because,why, before 1. He went to the dentist because he had toothache. 2. I read a book when I went to s[이름]p. 3. She hates being interrupted because she is phoning. 4. He was very sad because_his favourite team didn't win. 5. We were waiting for the bus _when it started to rain. 6. I didn't tell her because it was a secret. 7. I'll pay you _when you have finished the work. 8. I want to become a pilot _when I'm older. 9. I bought some new clothes before then I went home. 10. He is friendly and that's why I like him.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]. 
The weather is not also good in my city right now. It\'s quite weird and it makes people sick sometimes.
Anyway, take care of yourself. Drink plenty of water. ^^
I will talk to you tomorrow.
T. Gracelyn

1. He went to the dentist because he had toothache.
>>correct
2. I read a book when I went to s[이름]p.
>>I read a book before I went to s[이름]p.
3. She hates being interrupted because she is phoning.
>>correct
4. He was very sad because_his favourite team didn\'t win.
>>correct
5. We were waiting for the bus _when it started to rain.
>>correct
6. I didn\'t tell her because it was a secret.
>>correct
7. I\'ll pay you _when you have finished the work.
>>correct
8. I want to become a pilot _when I\'m older.
>>correct
9. I bought some new clothes before then I went home.
>>correct
10. He is friendly and that\'s why I like him.
>>correct

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