homework
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Essay Writing:
Describe your most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your future goals.
I've done lots of things and some of them are meaningful to me. But the most memorable achivement is that I have accomplished a certification of IT system auditor. This certification is called CISA(Certificated Information technology System Auditor). This is provided by ISACA which is a global organization and it can be used in many parts of the IT industry. For this, I had to study 5 sections of IT subjects, and I studied more than 10 books related with that. I don't have enough experiences to use it for now but, I think I will use it more and more if I keep working in this industry.
강사 첨삭
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T. Gracelyn
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But the most memorable achievement is that I have accomplished a certification of IT system auditor.
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This certification is called CISA(Certificated Information technology System Auditor).
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This is provided by ISACA which is a global organization and it can be used in many parts of the IT industry.
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For this, I had to study 5 sections of IT subjects, and I studied more than 10 books related with that.
>>In connection, I has to study 5 sections of IT subjects and I studied more than 10 books related to that.
I don\'t have enough experiences to use it for now but, I think I will use it more and more if I keep working in this industry.
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