HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! ^_^
I\'m so glad to know that you loved our class tonight.
I hope you\'ve learned a lot of things from the class.
Don\'t worry about your speaking skills too much.
One day, you\'d get the hang of speaking in English but like any other skill, it takes time.
So, be patient, keep practicing and keep the faith. You can do it! ^_~
By the way, I\'m so happy with your essay tonight.
Most of your sentences are correct. Good job!
Please take note though that when making sentences in English, the adverb should always come first before your verb or adjective.
Other than that you did an awesome job so keep writing! :)
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
Dear. Charry teacher ^_^
>> Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
Today\'s class was so good!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Our class for today was really great!
It is not bad to read 2 times but I am sad because 10 minutes is shorter than I thought.
>> It is not bad to read the dialogue 2 times but I am sad because 10 minutes is shorter than I thought.
I couldn\'t communicate well because I wasn\'t good at speaking.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I couldn\'t communicate fluently because I am still not that good at speaking in English.
It\'s nice to meet my friends even briefly today.
>> It\'s nice to even briefly meet my friends today.
Stay healthy during the hot summer.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Stay healthy in this very hot season.
Thank you, teacher. ^0^
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Thanks teacher.
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I went to Jeju island in 2006.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I visited Jeju island back in 2006.
I took the first airplane with my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I rode the first plane with my family.
It was hot in the south, but it was hotter in the summer.
>> It was hot in the south, but it was hotter in summer.
And it was expensive because it was tourist spot.
>> In addition, it was expensive because it was a tourist spot.
Back then, I didn\'t have much information, so I thought it was expensive.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That time I didn\'t have much information, so I thought it was expensive to go there.
It turned out to be an outrageous price.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The experience was beyond belief.
The food was not as good as I thought.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The quality of the food served didn\'t meet my expectations.
It was hard to see because there were too many people.
>> [Do you mean]: It was hard to go sight seeing because there were too many people.
If I go next time, I think I should go when the weather is cool.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I ever go there again, I should visit when the weather is cool.
I think we should look for information carefully before we go.
>> I think we should carefully look for information before we go.
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