Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day!
Mr. [Name] is such a lucky man! You are lucky as well to have met him. That\'s fate!
Thanks for sharing this inspiring story of yours. May your friendship last longer!
Take good care of yourself there, James!
Have a good one!
-Klein-
Who is the most reliable member you have in your team?
Why is that?
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The most reliable member in my team is Mr. [Name].
>>Correct
He works with me together since 2010.
>>He\'s been working with me since 2010.
When I was in the Lighting Division, Mr. [Name] applied for this company.
>>When I was in the Lighting division, Mr. [Name] applied to this company.
I interviewed him and chose him because he has a passion for a work.
>>I interviewed and chose him because he has passion for work.
He worked hard in the Lighting Division and he finished his work in there.
>>He worked hard in the Lighting division and finished it.
His attitude of working satisfied me.
>>His attitude toward working satisfied me.
Nowadays he is trying to finish his work in due time.
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And he tries to know the technology of solar module and he want to be a core man in our team.
>>And he tries to know the technology of solar module as he wants to be the core man in our team.
Because of that, I like him very much and I will care him in our team.
>>Because of that, I like him very much, so I will take care of him.
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