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2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Some people try to hold on to their youth with exercise, surgery, or medication. How do you feel about getting older? -I feel so sad. Because youth is so precious. I don't want to get older than 28-year-old in physically. Also, The mentality of 20s is the best adventurous among the all lifetimes. One businessman of Korea said, "I would like to change all of my property with me in my 20s." Like this, The youth is priceless.

강사 첨삭

This is very true, Paul!

Oh, where did all time go? Ha! Ha! Ha! If we could just go back to our youth, I would definitely revisit it over and over again. It\'s a priceless experience. Keep your ideas flowing. See you!

~Teacher Eunice


-I feel so sad.

>>> Correct!

Because youth is so precious.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: Because being a youth is precious.  

I don\'t want to get older than 28-year-old in physically.

>>> I don\'t want to get older than 28 years-old physically.

Also, The mentality of 20s is the best adventurous among the all lifetimes.

>>> Also, twenties people have the most adventurous mentality among all the stages of life.

One businessman of Korea said, \"I would like to change all of my property with me in my 20s.\" Like this, The youth is priceless.

>>> [Do you mean? A businessman in Korea once said, \"I would like to exchange all my properties to be back in my twenties again.\"]

Like this, The youth is priceless.

>>> A statement like this would make you realize that youth is priceless.  

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