HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry,^_^ Today's topic is difficult, but I'll do my best! I think the most important quality of a president is propriety. We need a proper distribution. If you're too much, you want more. If you lack it, you get a lot of complaints. There are many fields such as economy, society and diplomacy. I can't tell you all, but the president has to rule all this. To do that, it's important to be a helper. We should be the president's hands and feet. It's hard to think about. Everyone should think and help.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for diligently making your homework. 

I think your essay for tonight is not that bad. 

In fact, I think it\'s great. 

Not only because you did your best but also because you\'ve managed to make a lot of good sentences!

Keep it up! Keep practicing and keep writing. 

See you again tomorrow. ^_^

~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry,^_^

>> CORRECT!
Today\'s topic is difficult, but I\'ll do my best!
>> CORRECT!

OR >> I find the topic today difficult but I will give my best shot!
I think the most important quality of a president is propriety.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, propriety is the best quality a president could have.
We need a proper distribution.

>> [Do you mean]: We need to be content.
If you\'re too much, you want more.

>> [Do you mean]: If you have much, you still want more.
If you lack it, you get a lot of complaints.

>> If you are lacking, you get a lot of complaints.
There are many fields such as economy, society and diplomacy.

>> There are many aspects to consider such as the economy, the society and diplomacy.
I can\'t tell you all, but the president has to rule all this.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I can\'t mention everything but the president has the responsibility to preside over all of this.
To do that, it\'s important to be a helper.

>> To do that, it\'s important for us to be a helper.

OR >> To do that, it\'s important for us to extend a hand.

We should be the president\'s hands and feet.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We need to act as the president\'s hands and feet.
It\'s hard to think about.

>> It\'s hard to think about it.
Everyone should think and help.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Everyone should contribute something.

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