HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for diligently making your homework.
I think your essay for tonight is not that bad.
In fact, I think it\'s great.
Not only because you did your best but also because you\'ve managed to make a lot of good sentences!
Keep it up! Keep practicing and keep writing.
See you again tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry,^_^
>> CORRECT!
Today\'s topic is difficult, but I\'ll do my best!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I find the topic today difficult but I will give my best shot!
I think the most important quality of a president is propriety.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In my opinion, propriety is the best quality a president could have.
We need a proper distribution.
>> [Do you mean]: We need to be content.
If you\'re too much, you want more.
>> [Do you mean]: If you have much, you still want more.
If you lack it, you get a lot of complaints.
>> If you are lacking, you get a lot of complaints.
There are many fields such as economy, society and diplomacy.
>> There are many aspects to consider such as the economy, the society and diplomacy.
I can\'t tell you all, but the president has to rule all this.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I can\'t mention everything but the president has the responsibility to preside over all of this.
To do that, it\'s important to be a helper.
>> To do that, it\'s important for us to be a helper.
OR >> To do that, it\'s important for us to extend a hand.
We should be the president\'s hands and feet.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We need to act as the president\'s hands and feet.
It\'s hard to think about.
>> It\'s hard to think about it.
Everyone should think and help.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Everyone should contribute something.
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