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What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘advice'?
I think there are two kinds of advice. Some advice is necessary and helpful to me. But the advice of emphasizing just follow the customary behavior without considering my situation makes me uncomfortable.
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I think there are two kinds of advice.
>> Correct!
Some advice is necessary and helpful to me.
>> Correct!
But the advice of emphasizing just follow the customary behavior without considering my situation makes me uncomfortable.
>> But the advice of emphasizing like following the customary behavior without considering my situation makes me feel uncomfortable.
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