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2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Dear [Name].~ Happy the rest of the day.^^ Here is my homework ** Is fashion important? Why or why not? ** I'm not trendy with clothes. My clothes are comfortable and tidy for me. However, if there is an important meeting, dress up for TPO.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hannah!

Same here, I\'m not trendy or fashionable.

Maybe because of my age. kkk

For some people, fashion is important.

But the most important thing is how you carry yourself even with simple clothes.

See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Dear [Name].~

>> correct
Happy the rest of the day.^^

>> Be happy and enjoy the rest of the day. ^^

Here is my homework

>> Here is my homework.
** Is fashion important? Why or why not? **

>> correct
I\'m not trendy with clothes.

>> correct
My clothes are comfortable and tidy for me.

>> correct
However, if there is an important meeting, dress up for TPO.

>> However, if there is an important meeting, I dress up for TPO.

>> or: However, if there is an important meeting, I dress up for Time, Place, and Occasion.

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