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Good morning [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing about the best camping place in your country. Have fun with your family this weekend. Enjoy your camping activities.
~T. Kelly^^
Where is the best place to go camping in your country? Answer in no more than FIVE(5) sentences.
Best place to go camping in my country is .... there are many best place to go camping.
>> The best place to go camping in my my country is ______. There are many good places to go for camping.
But,people go to camping in GangWonDo.
>> But, people go camping in Gangwondo.
There are many mountains and vallies, and large sea like Borakai.
>> There are many mountains and valleys and there is also a big sea which is like Boracay.
In this trip, we will go to the sea.
>> In this trip, we will go to the sea.
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