Homework

Do you have a good time? It was so hot today,so be carefull your health! There are many people sick due to hot weather. -The previous homework I didn't do. I prefer a house rather than an apartment. my ideal house consists of 2 floors and has 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a library and toy room. I hope that I have a two kids. So a big bedroom is for me and wife, and the other rooms are for kids each other. And because I like vegitables and want the kids to like these, I set the a litte farm in the back yard. -The today's homework Of course. I think so. In korea, ther were some porblems and bankrupts In a small banks(It means a group, not a bruch. But I don't know how I explain it cleary :'( ) But a big banks have given me a trust so I can deposit my money to them. However it dosen't mean it is a good place to manage all my money. When I might earn a job and steady sallay, I will find any good ways like a fund, a stokck and a virtual currency.

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Teacher ELLY.

Do you have a good time?

>>Did you have a good time?

It was so hot today,so be carefull your health!

>>It was so hot today, so be careful with your health!

There are many people sick due to hot weather.

>>There are so many people sick due to the hot weather.

 -The previous homework I didn\'t do.

>>So, I didn’t do the previous homework.

 I prefer a house rather than an apartment.

CORRECT!

or>>I would like a house over an apartment.

 my ideal house consists of 2 floors and has 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a library and toy room.

>>My ideal house consists of 2 floors and has 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a library and a toy room.

I hope that I have a two kids.

>>I hope to have two kids.

So a big bedroom is for me and wife, and the other rooms are for kids each other.

>>So, the big bedroom will be for me and my wife, and the other 2 rooms are for each of our kids.

And because I like vegitables and want the kids to like these, I set the a litte farm in the back yard.

>>And because I like vegetables, I want the kids to like them too. Therefore, I would like to set up a mini farm in the back yard.

 -The today\'s homework

>>This is for today\'s homework.

 Of course…

CORRECT PHRASE!

or>>Obviously…

I think so.

CORRECT!

or>> That’s what I also think.

In korea, ther were some porblems and bankrupts In a small banks(It means a group, not a bruch.

>>In Korea, there were some problems and bankruptcy issues in small banks (It means a group, not brunch.)

But I don\'t know how I explain it cleary :\'( )

>>But I don\'t know how I can explain it clearly :\'( )

But a big banks have given me a trust so I can deposit my money to them.

>>But big banks have convinced me to trust them. So, I deposited my money at the bank.

 However it dosen\'t mean it is a good place to manage all my money.

>>However, it doesn\'t mean that it is a good place for my entire money to be managed.

When I might earn a job and steady sallay, I will find any good ways like a fund, a stokck and a virtual currency.

>>When I will have a job and a steady salary, I will find some other better ways like a fund, a stock or a virtual currency.