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What a nice answer! Thank you for being true.
You always inspire me with your answers, James.
Please take it easy there!
HAPPY WEEKEND!
-Klein-
How do you treat refugees?
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It is very difficult question to me.
>>It is a very difficult question to me.
I don\'t know what is the best way to treat refugees.
>>I don\'t know what the best way to treat refugees is.
If I were a refugee, I will ask the government will accept us.
>>If I were a refugee, I would ask the government to accept us.
But if I were in the oppisite site, maybe I will oppose the refugees.
>>But if I were in the opposite side, maybe I would oppose the refugees.
Anyway, I worry about after accepting refugees.
>>Anyway, I worry about the time after accepting the refugees or allowing them to stay.
If they don\'t make problems in Korea, I will accept them.
>>Correct
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