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2018-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you treat refugees? ==> It is very difficult question to me. I don\'t know what is the best way to treat refugees. If I were a refugee, I will ask the government will accept us. But if I were in the oppisite site, maybe I will oppose the refugees. Anyway, I worry about after accepting refugees. If they don\'t make problems in Korea, I will accept them.

강사 첨삭

What a nice answer! Thank you for being true.

You always inspire me with your answers, James.

Please take it easy there!

HAPPY WEEKEND!

-Klein-

How do you treat refugees?
 ==>
It is very difficult question to me.

>>It is a very difficult question to me.
 I don\'t know what is the best way to treat refugees.

>>I don\'t know what the best way to treat refugees is.
 If I were a refugee, I will ask the government will accept us.

>>If I were a refugee, I would ask the government to accept us.
But if I were in the oppisite site, maybe I will oppose the refugees.

>>But if I were in the opposite side, maybe I would oppose the refugees.
Anyway, I worry about after accepting refugees.

>>Anyway, I worry about the time after accepting the refugees or allowing them to stay.
 If they don\'t make problems in Korea, I will accept them.

>>Correct

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