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2018-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Dear [Name]. Have a nice weekend with your friends.^^ ** What's the best movie for you and why is it the best?** My favorite movie is The Shawshank Redemption, which was released in 1994. The acting of the main characters Tim Robinson and Morgan Freeman was so natural and impressive. It is a movie about Andy entering Shawshank Prison after being falsely accused and escaping without losing hope until the end. The key to this movie is freedom and hope. Andy says." Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best one. And the good never disappears. Isn't that wonderful? Bye``^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hannah!

Thank you for sharing about this movie.

I think the lesson is great.

Honestly, I haven\'t watched it.

See you!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Dear [Name].

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Have a nice weekend with your friends.^^

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** What\'s the best movie for you and why is it the best?**
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My favorite movie is The Shaw shank Redemption, which was released in 1994.

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The acting of the main characters Tim Robinson and Morgan Freeman was so natural and impressive.

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It is a movie about Andy entering Shaw shank Prison after being falsely accused and escaping without losing hope until the end.

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The key to this movie is freedom and hope.

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Andy says.\" Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best one. And the good never disappears.

>> Andy said, \"Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best one. And the good never disappears.\"

Isn\'t that wonderful? Bye`^^

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