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2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The ground is scorching hot in summer. 2. Many people die of heat stroke on summer. 3. I'll make it a point to bring a cellphone just in case. 4. When I made entry to a restrant a bell rang. 5. i wanted to exit exit from the room because of smoke.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher Jean

1. The ground is scorching hot in summer.

>> The ground is scorching hot in the summer.

2. Many people die of heat stroke on summer.

>> Many people die of heat stroke in the summer.

3. I\'ll make it a point to bring a cellphone just in case.

>> I\'ll make it a point to bring a cellphone, just in case.

4. When I made entry to a restrant a bell rang.

>> When I entered the restaurant, a bell rang.

>> or: When I made an entry into a restaurant, a bell rang.

5. i wanted to exit exit from the room because of smoke.

>> I wanted to exit from the room because of the smoke.

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