HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ I looked for Palawan after listening to you. It's a really nice island. I really want to go someday. Come to think of it, I don't know where you are. May I ask you? I live in Suwon. Thank you for your sympathy. It's really okay now. Have a nice weekend. See you on Monday! I've never thought about today's topic. But if so, I won't be able to dump as much garbage as I do now. It would not take longer to make waste than human life. I will drink water for my descendants. Life is short, so we can be selfish. I think I'll take it easy on everything. I want to live around the world for decades and learn the culture and language of the place. And I want to be the best expert in some field. I haven't thought about it yet, but ... I think a thousand years will be enough. But it seems beautiful because there is an end.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for writing this meaningful essay.

I always enjoy reading your essays.

I live in Baguio City here in the  Philippines.

It is a small city located in the middle of the mountains.

You should come here when you visit my country.

You\'ll love the people, the culture, the food and the weather.

We have the best weather in the country. ^^

If I had a thousand years to live, I would spend it traveling and concentrate on building a legacy for my grandchildren and great grandchildren.

See you later in class!

Take care always. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :)

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I looked for Palawan after listening to you.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I searched for Palawan after listening to you.

It\'s a really nice island.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s a beautiful island.

I really want to go someday.

>> I really want to go there someday.
Come to think of it, I don\'t know where you are.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Come to think of it, I have no idea where you are.

May I ask you?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Is it okay if I ask you?
I live in Suwon.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I reside in Suwon.
Thank you for your sympathy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I appreciate your sympathy.

It\'s really okay now.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The situation is really fine now.

Have a nice weekend.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Enjoy your weekend.

See you on Monday!
>> CORRECT!

OR >> Let\'s see each other on Monday!
I\'ve never thought about today\'s topic. 

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I\'ve never paid much attention to today\'s topic.  
But if so, I won\'t be able to dump as much garbage as I do now.

>> But if so, I won\'t dump as much garbage as I do now.
It would not take longer to make waste than human life.

>> [Do you mean]: It would not take long to turn the place we live in into a waste in our lifetime.

I will drink water for my descendants.

>> [Do you mean]: I will drink more water and take care of my self so I could see my descendants.
Life is short, so we can be selfish.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Life is short and it\'s fine to be selfish.
I think I\'ll take it easy on everything.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think I\'ll try to live a laid back life.

I want to live around the world for decades and learn the culture and language of the place.

>> I want to live around the world for decades and learn the culture and language of the places.
And I want to be the best expert in some field.

>> I also want to be an expert in a specific field.

OR >> In addition, I want to be an expert in a certain field.
I haven\'t thought about it yet, but ... I think a thousand years will be enough.

>> I haven\'t thought about it yet but I think a thousand years will be enough.
But it seems beautiful because there is an end.

>> However, it seems beautiful because there is an end.

OR >> On the other hand, it seems beautiful because there is an end.

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