homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite food in the summer? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My favorite food in summer is ice cream.
It is very cool and sweet.
So,everyone maybe like it.
I also eat the ice cream in winter.
And,I also like a watermelon.
It has a lots of water and sweet.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong hun!^^
Thank you for sharing your favorite food in the summer. Keep yourself cool and hydrated this hot season.
See you in class.^^
~T. Kelly^^
What is your favorite food in the summer? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. My favorite food in the summer is ice cream.
>> Correct.It is very cool and sweet.
>> It is very cold and sweet.So,everyone maybe like it.
>> So everyone likes it. I also eat the ice cream in winter.
>> I also eat ice cream in winter.And,I also like a watermelon.
>> And,I also like watermelon. It has a lots of water and sweet.
>> It has high water content and is also sweet.
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