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Thank you for your concentrate about my un-proper expretions! And I aprriciated your feedback but it was one defact! It was that the latest homework was same with the previous! So. I will write here about a my weekend things. I gave a money for purchasing a air tiket and clothes from my mother. So. I went to ROTTE WORLD MALL and bought a short T-shirt and pants. Then I met a older friend and had a dinner. It's menu is a korean cold nudles. After the dinner we went to a cafer and talked about our future plans. I brought him to a bus stop and said good-bye. Then I met friends who have become intimate from middle-school. One of them had worked at hotel bakery in Jeju island, As he came back hometown few days ago, took a present for me. It was a tea set. So, I felt very happy and thanks for his favor.

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Teacher ELLY.

Thank you for your concentrate about my un-proper expretions!

>>Thank you for your corrections on my improper expressions!

And I aprriciated your feedback but it was one defact!

>>And I appreciate your feedback but it has one defect (or error)!

It was that the latest homework was same with the previous!

>>It was that the latest homework was the same with the previous one!

So. I will write here about a my weekend things.

>>So, I will just write about my weekend activities here.

I gave a money for purchasing a air tiket and clothes from my mother.

>>I gave some money to purchase an air ticket and some clothes to my mother.

So. I went to ROTTE WORLD MALL and bought a short T-shirt and pants.

>>So, I went to the LOTTE WORLD MALL and bought some shorts, a T-shirt and pants.

Then I met a older friend and had a dinner.

>>Then I met an old friend and we had some dinner.

It\'s menu is a korean cold nudles.

>>We ordered from the menus some Korean cold noodles.

After the dinner we went to a cafer and talked about our future plans.

>>After dinner, we went to a cafe and talked about our future plans.

I brought him to a bus stop and said good-bye.

CORRECT!

or>>I walked him over to a bus stop and we said good-bye.

Then I met friends who have become intimate from middle-school.

>>Then I met some friends with whom I have become close since middle-school.

One of them had worked at hotel bakery in Jeju island,

>>One of them worked at a hotel bakery in Jeju island.

As he came back hometown few days ago, took a present for me.

>>Since he just returned home a few days ago, he got a present for me.

It was a tea set.

CORRECT!

or>>He gave me a tea set.

So, I felt very happy and thanks for his favor. 

>>So, I felt very happy and thankful for showing me some favor.