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2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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#1) what is the best thing about your birthplace? I was born seoul. There are so many different people. So there are many hot place things. For example Hongik university and Itawon Samcheongdong and ikseondong etc. Various world cultures and artistic feelings are cut all over the place. And people have a higher passion and busy. It looks like you\'re looking at New York. There always have seriously traffic jam because land is small and lives many people. Thats the reason why transportation is well developed. Its a lot of fun and fancy. #2) How is our accent affected by our birthplace? Seoul use standard language. There may be a little difference people by people. But Therefore, Language is very calm and pronouncei is be hear well

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework every day. I can see your determination to learn and your diligence in studying. Keep it up!

Enjoy the rest of your day!

~~Teacher Kate


1. I was born seoul.

>>>I was born in Seoul.
 2. There are so many different people.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>There is a diversity of people.
 3. So there are many hot place things.

>>>There is a lot of nice places to go to.
 4. For example Hongik university and Itawon Samcheongdong and ikseondong etc.

>>>For example are Hongik university, Itawon Samcheongdong, and Ikseondong etc.
 5. Various world cultures and artistic feelings are cut all over the place.

>>>Various cultures from around the world and artistic feelings are all over the place.
 6. And people have a higher passion and busy.

>>>People are passionate and busy.
 7. It looks like you\'re looking at New York.

>>>It is like looking at New York City.

OR>>>It is very similar to New York City.
 8. There always have seriously traffic jam because land is small and lives many people.

>>>There\'s usually a serious traffic jam in the city because the land is small but the population is big.
 9. Thats the reason why transportation is well developed.

>>>That\'s the reason why transportation is well developed.
 10. Its a lot of fun and fancy.

>>>It is a fun and fancy city.

11. Seoul use standard language.

>>>People in Seoul use standard Korean.
 12. There may be a little difference people by people.

>>> There may be a little difference from people to people.
 13. But Therefore, Language is very calm and pronouncei is be hear well.

>>>The accent is calm and is pronounced well.



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