Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
1. I was born seoul.
>>>I was born in Seoul.
2. There are so many different people.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>There is a diversity of people.
3. So there are many hot place things.
>>>There is a lot of nice places to go to.
4. For example Hongik university and Itawon Samcheongdong and ikseondong etc.
>>>For example are Hongik university, Itawon Samcheongdong, and Ikseondong etc.
5. Various world cultures and artistic feelings are cut all over the place.
>>>Various cultures from around the world and artistic feelings are all over the place.
6. And people have a higher passion and busy.
>>>People are passionate and busy.
7. It looks like you\'re looking at New York.
>>>It is like looking at New York City.
OR>>>It is very similar to New York City.
8. There always have seriously traffic jam because land is small and lives many people.
>>>There\'s usually a serious traffic jam in the city because the land is small but the population is big.
9. Thats the reason why transportation is well developed.
>>>That\'s the reason why transportation is well developed.
10. Its a lot of fun and fancy.
>>>It is a fun and fancy city.
11. Seoul use standard language.
>>>People in Seoul use standard Korean.
12. There may be a little difference people by people.
>>> There may be a little difference from people to people.
13. But Therefore, Language is very calm and pronouncei is be hear well.
>>>The accent is calm and is pronounced well.
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