homework
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I think these sentences have some error.
If they have any errors, please correct them.
1. The main obstacle would appear to be the number of recipients of healthcare compared to the taxpayers are who need to fund it.
2. I agree with those who argue that free a health service is a worthy ambition for a country to have, and that we should all contribute something to the welfare of our fellow citizens.
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I think these sentences have some error.
>> I think these sentences have some errors.
1. The main obstacle would appear to be the number of recipients of healthcare compared to the taxpayers are who need to fund it.
>> The main obstacle appears to be the number of recipients of healthcare compared to the taxpayers who provide the fund for the said healthcare.
I agree with those who argue that free a health service is a worthy ambition for a country to have, and that we should all contribute something to the welfare of our fellow citizens.
>> correct
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