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2018-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Homework : Are you good at reading maps? Please discuss. I mostly good at finding routes. When I need to find some routes, I use the map-application. It is the 'Naver maps' (Naver is Korean famous corporation specialized web site. I sometime use the 'Google maps' but it doesn't fit in with Korea. In other word, it little different and doesn't write the name of some buildings. Anyway, when I use the maps I arrange the maps first so it can be the same with real world . Then I decide the direction of the routes. And I remember the name of buildings located in corners and also do orders.(It's like 'turn right then turn left and turn left then go straight.') Resultingly I can usually reach the destination.

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Hello [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework: Are you good at reading maps? Please discuss.

I mostly good at finding routes.

>>I’m mostly good at finding routes.

When I need to find some routes, I use the map-application.

CORRECT!

or>>When I need to find some routes, I use the app.

It is the \'Naver maps\' (Naver is Korean famous corporation specialized web site.

>>It is the \'Naver maps\' (Naver is a famous Korean corporation specializing in websites).

I sometime use the \'Google maps\' but it doesn\'t fit in with Korea.

>>I, sometimes, use the \'Google maps\' but it doesn\'t fit in with Korea.

In other word, it little different and doesn\'t write the name of some buildings.

>>In other words, it is a little different and it doesn\'t write the names of some buildings.

Anyway, when I use the maps I arrange the maps first so it can be the same with real world.

>>Anyway, when I use the maps, I arrange it first so it has the same setup with that of the real world.

Then I decide the direction of the routes.

>>Then, I will decide the directions of the routes.

And I remember the name of buildings located in corners and also do orders.

>>And I remember and write the names of the buildings located on the corners and also put the others in order.

(It\'s like \'turn right then turn left and turn left then go straight.\')

>>(Some examples are: \'turn right, then left, turn left again, and then go straight.\')

Resultingly I can usually reach the destination.

>>As a result, I usually reach the destination.

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