HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for still writing an essay even if you\'re dead on your feet tonight.
I understand your situation and I empathize with you.
Please don\'t stress your self too much at work.
When bad things happen to me, I usually try to calm down by taking a deep breath.
When I\'m feeling better, I focus on my problem and set aside the panic that I feel inside.
When I am angry, I swear a lot but I do that inside my head. kkk.
Anyway, I hope you\'re feeling better.
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I\'m sorry I only look tired every day. T_T
>> I\'m sorry I sound tired every day. T_T
has passed Monday, so I\'ll let\'s try harder!
>> Monday has passed so let\'s try harder!
Many unpleasant things happen in life.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> A lot of bad things happen in life.
When I do, I breathe deeply so that I don\'t feel too angry.
>> When I do experience one, I breathe deeply so that I don\'t feel too angry.
If I don\'t calm down, I swear inside.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I swear inside when I fail to calm down.
When I calm down, Think why the other person did it.
>> When I calm down, I think of why the other person did it.
I think life doesn\'t go my way.
>> CORRECT!
Think differently.
>> I think differently.
Think about what I likes.
>> I think about what I like.
I think this too will pass.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think that it will be over soon.
If I think like that, I\'ll soon forget.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I think of things that way, I\'ll soon forget.
I feel much better. : D
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My mood improves when I do that.
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