HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ I'm sorry I only look tired every day. T_T has passed Monday, so I'll let's try harder! Many unpleasant things happen in life. When I do, I breathe deeply so that I don't feel too angry. If I don't calm down, I swear inside. When I calm down, Think why the other person did it. I think life doesn't go my way. Think differently. Think about what I likes. I think this too will pass. If I think like that, I'll soon forget. I feel much better. : D

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for still writing an essay even if you\'re dead on your feet tonight. 

I understand your situation and I empathize with you. 

Please don\'t stress your self too much at work. 

When bad things happen to me, I usually try to calm down by taking a deep breath.

When I\'m feeling better, I focus on my problem and set aside the panic that I feel inside. 

When I am angry, I swear a lot but I do that inside my head. kkk. 

Anyway, I hope you\'re feeling better. 

See you again tomorrow. 

~Teacher Charry :)   

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^

>> CORRECT!
I\'m sorry I only look tired every day. T_T

>> I\'m sorry I sound tired every day. T_T
has passed Monday, so I\'ll let\'s try harder!
>> Monday has passed so let\'s try harder!
Many unpleasant things happen in life.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A lot of bad things happen in life.
When I do, I breathe deeply so that I don\'t feel too angry.

>> When I do experience one, I breathe deeply so that I don\'t feel too angry.
If I don\'t calm down, I swear inside.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I swear inside when I fail to calm down.
When I calm down, Think why the other person did it.

>> When I calm down, I think of why the other person did it.
I think life doesn\'t go my way.

>> CORRECT!
Think differently.

>> I think differently.
Think about what I likes.

>> I think about what I like.
I think this too will pass.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think that it will be over soon.
If I think like that, I\'ll soon forget.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If I think of things that way, I\'ll soon forget.
I  feel much better. : D

>>  CORRECT!

OR >> My mood improves when I do that.

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