Homework

This is precious, Sir [이름]!

We shouldn\'t commit violence out of money, it\'s vicious. Thank you for handing in your writing task. Keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice

I think it is so dangerous.

>>> Correct!

Although purpose is good for others, It is harmful for our life.

>>>> Although the purpose is good for others, it is harmful for our life.

All illegally action cause punishment by law. 

>>> All illegal actions will cause punishments by law. 

Sometimes, We can see a people who do illegally action for money.

>>> Sometimes, we can see people who do illegal actions for money.

>>> OR: Sometimes, we can see people who commit violence for money.

Almost of them don\'t be caught by police at first.

>>> Most of them weren\'t caught by the police at their first attempt.

At that time, They misunderstand to avoid police invastigation, and do illegally action repeatably. But, They will be finally caught. 

>>> At that time, they can avoid police investigations, and do illegal actions repeatedly, but they will finally be caught in the end. 

If we get punished by low, That criminal record give us bad influence for our life.

>>> If we get punished by law, that criminal record gives us a bad influence in our lives.  

If you have criminal record, You are hard to get a job. 

>>> If you have a criminal record, it would be hard for  you to get a job. 

And almost people may avoid us. Because of criminal record, You may to illegally action to take money.

>>> Almost all people might avoid us because of our criminal record about taking money illegally.

It is vicious circle.

>>> It is a vicious circle.