Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for today!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
Oh, I forgot that I didn\'t do my homework.
>>Oh, I forgot to do my homework.
HOMEWORK: How often do you get real letters? Please discuss.
Actually, I barely get them.
CORRECT!
or>>In fact, I don’t normally receive any.
Nowadays most people don\'t write letters because of a phone and the internet.
>>Nowadays, most people don\'t write letters because of the phone and the internet.
So excepting the period when I did the military service, I didn\'t take or get real letters.
>>So, except for the period when I went to serve the military, I didn\'t receive or get any real letters.
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