Homework
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Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK: Do you spend a lot of money buying clothes? Please explain.
I spend a lot of money buy clothes.
>>I spend a lot of money to buy clothes.
or>>I spend tons of money in buying clothes.
When I receive money of doing my part time job, I immediately go to shopping tomorrow.
>>When I get my money from my part time job, I immediately go shopping the next day.
This behaviour is a kind of self-satisfaction and self-reward.
>>This behaviour is kind of satisfactory and very rewarding.
I often feel insufficient when I choose clothes for going outside although there are many clothes In the furniture.
>>I often feel that I have insufficient clothes whenever I am looking for something to wear outside. Although, I have many clothes in the closet to choose from.
But after I decided to go Australia, I hadn\'t bought clothes until I started the part time job at my friend\'s factory.
>>But after I decided to go to Australia, I haven\'t bought any clothes until I started the part time job at my friend\'s factory.
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