Homework

2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Do you spend a lot of money buying clothes? Please explain. I spend a lot of money buy clothes. When I receive money of doing my part time job, I immediately go to shopping tomorrow. This behaviour is a kind of self-satisfaction and self-reward. I often feel insufficient when I choose clothes for going outside although there are many clothes In the furniture. But after I decided to go Australia, I hadn't bought clothes until I started the part time job at my friend's factory.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you so much!

Have some fun this Thursday and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: Do you spend a lot of money buying clothes? Please explain.

I spend a lot of money buy clothes.

>>I spend a lot of money to buy clothes.

or>>I spend tons of money in buying clothes.

When I receive money of doing my part time job, I immediately go to shopping tomorrow.

>>When I get my money from my part time job, I immediately go shopping the next day.

This behaviour is a kind of self-satisfaction and self-reward.

>>This behaviour is kind of satisfactory and very rewarding.

I often feel insufficient when I choose clothes for going outside although there are many clothes In the furniture.

>>I often feel that I have insufficient clothes whenever I am looking for something to wear outside. Although, I have many clothes in the closet to choose from.

But after I decided to go Australia, I hadn\'t bought clothes until I started the part time job at my friend\'s factory.

>>But after I decided to go to Australia, I haven\'t bought any clothes until I started the part time job at my friend\'s factory.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·