HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed our free-talking class tonight.
You were stressed the whole day and I think freely talking to each other helped you to ease a little. :)
I\'ve heard of \"somac\" and I\'ve also tried it a few times but I still think it\'s too strong. kkk.
Anyway, having all the money in the world seems to be really great.
If I had all the money in the world, I would probably invest a portion of it, use it for traveling, provide a safe trust fund for my family and spend the rest for charities. ^^
I hope you\'re having a great night. See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
Actually, whenever I drink soju, so strong that I mix it with beer.
>> Actually, whenever I drink soju, I feel that it\'s so strong that I have to mix it with beer.
OR >> Actually, whenever I drink soju, I feel that it\'s too strong so I mix it with beer.
In Korea, it is called \" somac\"
>> In Korea, it is called \" somac\".
Have you heard of it? >_<
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Are you familiar with it?
I didn\'t read the textbook today, but it was a lot of fun.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I didn\'t study the textbook today but I had so much fun in class.
Thank you for correcting my mistake. ^0^
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Thank you for giving me corrections. ^0^
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Wow .. Today topic is very interesting.
>> Wow! Today\'s topic is very interesting.
Actually, I don\'t have much greed.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Actually, I am not a greedy person.
I also hate to count money.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I also dislike counting money.
So I don\'t do general affairs.
>> That\'s why I don\'t do general affairs.
But if I had money all over the world ... I buy nice house, car, clothes, etc.
>> But if I had all the money in the world, I will buy a nice house, a car, some clothes, etc.
I also travel around the world.
>> I will also travel around the world.
And I want to give it to my parents.
>> I also want to give some to my parents.
The rest of the money is left to a competent expert.
>> The rest of the money left will be in the care of a competent expert.
I want to use it efficiently.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I want to wisely use it.
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