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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I took risks about my behavior.I behaved with courage.I know a single woman.woman is disabled.I learn that I must help people with disabilities

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I took risks about my behavior.

>> I took risks.


I behaved with courage.

>> correct

>> or: I was courageous.


I know a single woman.

>> or: I know just one woman.

>> or: I know a woman who\'s single.


woman is disabled.

>> The woman is disabled.


I learn that I must help people with disabilities 

>> I learned that I must help people with disabilities.

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