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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

What are you craving for? ==> As you know, I would like speaking English very fluently when I meet foreigner. Because of that, I started this class for upgrading my English skill. But I couldn't focus on this class, because I am busy in the company and I cannot make time to review after class. I also try to finish homework but I cannot finish it several times. Anyway I am not a good speaker but I am happy when I talk with you. In the company, I want to make our team to be good. There are many problems when I manage my team, but I try to solve that with my team members by talking about our problem. Everything what I am craving for is very difficult thing, but I am trying to achieve them.

강사 첨삭

You made it!

You found time for this homework of yours again. Thank you!

I hope you are having a wonderful time there.

Keep safe!

-Klein-

What are you craving for?
 ==>
 As you know, I would like speaking English very fluently when I meet foreigner.
>>As you know, I like speaking English very fluently when I meet a foreigner.

Because of that, I started this class for upgrading my English skill.

>>Correct
 But I couldn\'t focus on this class, because I am busy in the company and I cannot make time to review after class.

>>Correct
 I also try to finish homework but I cannot finish it several times.

>>I also try to finish the homework but I cannot finish it several times.
 Anyway I am not a good speaker but I am happy when I talk with you.
>>Correct
In the company, I want to make our team to be good. 

>>Correct
 There are many problems when I manage my team, but I try to solve that with my team members by talking about our problem.
>>There are many problems when I manage my team, but I try to solve them with my team members by talking about our problem.
Everything what I am craving for is very difficult thing, but I am trying to achieve them.

>>Everything that I am craving for is a very difficult thing, but I am trying to achieve them.

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