homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a famous person (e.g. a singer or athlete) that you admire. Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
Famous person in Korea is 유재석.
His job was gagmen and more famous, and now most world people know him,and many broadcast.
I know him 6years ago.
I think he is the great person in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong hun!
Thank you for your homework. Please go over my corrections.
Have a good day!
~T. Kelly^^
Describe a famous person (e.g. a singer or athlete) that you admire. Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
Famous person in Korea is 유재석.
>> One famous person in Korea is 유재석.
His job was gagmen and more famous, and now most world people know him,and many broadcast.
>> He appears in a gag show and he is now more famous in broadcasting and all over the world.
I know him 6years ago.
>> I met him 6 years ago.
I think he is the great person in Korea.
>> I think he is a great person.
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