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Hi Seong Won!
You raised an important point here.
You have established a great opinion.
I did miss your work
I\'ll call you tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think the reason why people do volunteer work is different.
>> I think people have different reasons why they do volunteer work.
For some people, they do volunteer work because they think it is worthy.
>> Correct
And most of the students do volunteer work just to get volunteer activity score for school like me.
>> And most students do volunteer work just to get volunteer activity score for school like me.
Actually, I don\'t think the schools require students to do volunteer work and get scores.
>> Actually, I don\'t think schools require students to do volunteer work and get scores.
The volunteer work is more worthy when the people do it for themselves.
>> Volunteer work is more worthy when people do it for themselves.
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