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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think the reason why people do volunteer work is different. For some people, they do volunteer work because they think it is worthy. And most of the students do volunteer work just to get volunteer activity score for school like me. Actually, I don't think the schools require students to do volunteer work and get scores. The volunteer work is more worthy when the people do it for themselves.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You raised an important point here.

You have established a great opinion.

I did miss your work

I\'ll call you tomorrow!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think the reason why people do volunteer work is different.
>> I think people have different reasons why they do volunteer work.
For some people, they do volunteer work because they think it is worthy.
>> Correct
And most of the students do volunteer work just to get volunteer activity score for school like me.
>> And most students do volunteer work just to get volunteer activity score for school like me.
Actually, I don\'t think the schools require students to do volunteer work and get scores.
>> Actually, I don\'t think schools require students to do volunteer work and get scores.
The volunteer work is more worthy when the people do it for themselves.

>> Volunteer work is more worthy when people do it for themselves.

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