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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Connect the sentences with a suitable linking word (but, when, because, where) 1. When I have a test I'm always very nervous. 2. The exam was difficult but Bob passed it easily. 3. I can't buy a new car because I haven't got enough money. 4. It's very late because I'm very tired. 5. I didn't know where to go. 6. First we went to the cinema and then we went to a restaurant. 7. When you cross the street you must look carefully. 8. It was very cold outside. Because we didn't go out. 9. I wanted to visit her because I didn't have any time. 10. We stayed at home when it was raining heavily.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Jake! Thank you very much. Take note of the corrections.
I will talk to you tomorrow. 
Take care.
T. Gracelyn

1. When I have a test I\'m always very nervous.
>>correct
2. The exam was difficult but Bob passed it easily.
>>correct
3. I can\'t buy a new car because I haven\'t got enough money.
>>correct
4. It\'s very late because I\'m very tired.
>>It\'s very late and I\'m very tired.
5. I didn\'t know where to go.
>>correct
6. First we went to the cinema and then we went to a restaurant.
>>correct
7. When you cross the street you must look carefully.
>>correct
8. It was very cold outside. Because we didn\'t go out.
>>It was very cold outside. So we didn\'t go out.
9. I wanted to visit her because I didn\'t have any time.
>>I wanted to visit her but I didn\'t have any time.
10. We stayed at home when it was raining heavily.
>>We stayed at home because it was raining heavily.

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