Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
>> come over/coming over
>> to get rid of
>> a lot of trash
>> always happens
>> uploaded
My friend hollered at me to come over to her quickly.
I washed my car to get rid of blurries of front window.
A lot of trash is produed when the factory is operating.
Happy things always happens when unpleasant thing also happens.
I take the text file uploaded by internet web provider.
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My friend hollered at me to come over to her quickly.
>> correct
I washed my car to get rid of blurries of front window.
>> I washed the windshield of my car to get rid of the dust and dirt for better visibility.
A lot of trash is produed when the factory is operating.
>> Factories often generate a lot of trash.
Happy things always happens when unpleasant thing also happens.
>> Happy things always happen when unpleasant things occur.
I take the text file uploaded by internet web provider.
>> I took the text file uploaded by the internet web provider.
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