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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I would rather go to university rather than getting a job. Some people might go to university to get a job, but I think it is better to study instead of working. If I go to university and can't get a job, I wouldn't have to work. I don't want to get stress because of relatinoships.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher Jean



I would rather go to university rather than getting a job.

>> I would rather go to university than get a job.


Some people might go to university to get a job, but I think it is better to study instead of working.

>> Some people might go to university to get a job, but I think it is better to study than to work.


 If I go to university and can\'t get a job, I wouldn\'t have to work.

>> correct


I don\'t want to get stress because of relatinoships.

>> I don\'t want to suffer from stress because of relationships.

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